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Title: The Atrocity Archives
Author: Charles Stross
Genre: Cold War technothriller only with Cthulhoid beasties instead of Commies
Thingummies: 4

Synopsis: IT tech in a shadowy British intelligence agency devoted to mathemagically defending the world against demons gets a longed-for promotion to field agent--and discovers not only will he have nightmares for the rest of his life, he still can't escape the paperwork.

Thoughts: If the Dresden Files is a noir detective meets vampires, Stross' Laundry is if James Bond tried to fight Lovecraftian horrors while working in the same office as Dilbert.

First person narrator Bob is delightfully snarky, the only possible defense to going nuts when you watch that annoying dude from accounting get possessed by demons while at a training seminar and then have to fill out all the paperwork for misuse of the fire extinguisher you had to use to put him down. Stross manages an impressive juxtaposition between the indignities and ridiculousness of modern bureaucracies with Nazi war atrocities and existential horror. It's funny and creepy and a little too true in both cases.

There's an enormous amount of technobabble, using a mix of real IT jargon (only some of which I recognize) and made up stuff. It makes sense in context--he's an IT guy and they really talk like this. But there are definitely points where it obscures the action a bit too much. Specifically, there are two inconsistencies that I can't tell if they went unaddressed or whether the explanations were just so buried in geek-speak that I missed them.

First, Bob seems to know way too much about the magical weapons he handles, given his stated backstory. The guy was a computer scientist who goofed around with some stuff he shouldn't have and got himself drafted, ending up working in a dead end tech support role until he managed to wiggle onto the active duty roster. There's a sequence where he establishes he knows nothing about conventional firearms, which makes perfect sense. But he's apparently a crack shot with and expert on an esoteric magical weapon, which shocks everyone, but he never quite seems to explain. Why does he know this shit?

Second, (minor spoilers ahead) the infovore waited in a dead universe patiently for the Nazis to invite him in. So why is it that the newly dying universe will contain him, if only they can keep him from coming through the portal for the next fifteen minutes? Sure, nearly all the energy in the dying universe has been eaten. But if he could survive in the original dead universe, why can't he survive in the newly dead universe until someone lets him in again? Did he really kill off all the terrorists who summoned him in the first place?

So I found the fact that some of the info dumps are kind of deliberately unintelligible to be somewhat frustrating. Even so, the book was loads of fun.

Date: 2011-09-12 08:19 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile] xannoside.livejournal.com

For the first, the impression I got is that, unlike normal objects, magical objects really are a case of "knows the math" - Bob can't fire a gun to save his life because actually shooting a gun is about more than physics, but magic (in this universe) is really just a bunch of equations. Plus, the basilisk gun really isn't laser accurate.

The second one is a little sketchy. The reader basically has to assume that Bob's interpretation of the dying universe (only about 8 hours left) is true, and that's not clarified.

Date: 2011-09-12 08:49 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile] jethrien.livejournal.com
But why does he know this particular math? It's made pretty clear that everything is very need to know. He repeatedly explains how one makes a basilisk gun to other employees who clearly don't know, but his stated background has nothing about weapons development. In The Concrete Jungle, which is packaged with The Atrocity Archives, he clearly knows nothing of gorgonism (and by the way, why do his superiors insist on not briefing him except to raise the tension for the reader? I thought it would be something where his perceptions would warp reality, but no, and his ignorance nearly fries a town). But he knows exactly how a basilisk gun not only works, but is made. Ditto for the Hand of God.

It's like saying that because someone is good at string theory, they totally know how to build and operate the Large Hadron Collider without looking shit up.

Date: 2011-09-12 09:07 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile] xannoside.livejournal.com
More like he knows how to construct a rifle, but doesn't know how to mix gunpowder.

Given that one of the first things that we see Bob do is help himself to data that he really shouldn't be messing with, it doesn't seem particularly strange that he would know things, in an incomplete fashion, outside his original core competency.

That's one of the reasons they actually make him a field agent.

That plus, in a somewhat lazy-writer kind of fashion, the thing that Bob is an expert at (summoning magic) ties directly into every other kind of magic that appears in the books.

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